Harmony First of all, I wouldn’t say this is house music. It has kinda has a dubstep/ambient feeling to it and I am missing the up-tempo kick. It wasn’t what I expected when I started listening to this song, but I am not disappointed :)
I will start of with some compliments. I really like the chord progression and the feeling it gives. It is stable yet unexpected and that makes it interesting to listen to. I also like the sounds that you used, with emphasis on the vocals. Did you record them yourself? It really smoothens the track!
As feedback I would say: I was kind of disappointed when the beat stopped in the middle. The beat came smooth and unexpected, and I really was like: „ooohhhh yeeaahhh” for a moment. It’s the peak in the song, the part where the build-up leads to. But suddenly it was over, rapidly cut off and it didn’t come back. I think it would be great to let that beat return, and make it even bigger the second time. I would really give a clear beginning and ending, and thats good for the overall listening experience.
Besides that, you made a great song. Smooth and relax, love it! Keep up the great work!